Score: 9

"Plot Heavy, But still suprasses the others."

submission: Super Mario bros Z ep.7

date: October 5, 2008

As a huge fan of the entire series, and a fan of the plot, it is surely a great and well worth the wait episode. However, I felt that it went a bit strong in the plot. Don't get me wrong, it's a fine plot, but a majority of the subjects talked about was simple repetition of previously known facts.

You did well, however, balancing out the action to keep people moving along to the end, but I found myself rapidly pressing space near the end, in the hopes to see the next fight.

Maybe it's due to a short attention span, or something else.

But I digress. Excellent work that surpasses both quality and quantity. This episode was extensively long, remarkably well done, especially the sprite parts (Heck, that's how NES games should have been like), and compelling story. But maybe just a bit too much story.

Score: 10

"Wow. Just wow."

submission: Arfenhouse Teh Movie 6

date: August 10, 2006

You've outdone yourself MisterRoo. You have mastered complete randomness, idiocicy, and halarious material to make possibly your finest work yet. I haven't laughed that hard in such a long time. I've always liked your flashes, and this does not fail to dissapoint.

Seriously, you deserve a huge medal or reward for all this. Words fail me on how awesome you have done.

All I can say is keep up the good work, and I'd like to see more of your work (not arfenhouse, get it straight)

:D

Score: 7

"Although you should read more about it."

submission: Pikmin: Reality Check

date: May 30, 2005

Sounding like a complete nerd here, but if you played the games more, you would know the planet is unable to house humans because of Poision Oxygen. Humans couldn't live there.

But as for the flash, it was clever. It got me a laugh.

Score: 9

"There you go!"

submission: Super Luigi World Part 1

date: September 7, 2004

See how better you got it when you had it at a faster fps? Congratulations on your work. Keep trying.

Score: 7

"Neat."

submission: Super Luigi World

date: September 6, 2004

Alright, so it isn't the best flash on newgrounds, but you do have a good basis. Here is something you should do though- change it to 30fps. If we have learned anything throughout frames per second in games, 12 makes it seem jerky, slow, and unappealing. Try 30fps and see how it looks: you'll probably get a better score!

On another note, where was that music from, and how did you make them run like that? Was that frame-by-frame action? :p (Yeah, I'm a beginning Flash artist and I need to learn!)

Score: 3

"Eh?"

submission: Kerri's Bigger Invention!

date: August 26, 2004

I think it's a nicely done flash with good animation...

But did you ask Frog on using his characters to this kind of smut?

Let alone, did he draw all that O.o?

Score: 10

"Perfect!"

submission: Resident Earthbound

date: August 17, 2004

I love it all, not only did you make fun of certain things, did great animation, made a slight spoof from Madness, show guns and zombies, but you stuck it all in Earthbound- the best RPG for the SNES. I hand my hat to you, and hope to see your next Earthbound Related Flash real soon ^.^

Score: 8

"You know..."

submission: Water Cooler Shorts

date: August 4, 2004

I never really liked clocked flash. Most of it was super-retarded and pointless. But you shown that not all clock movies are that bad.

You don't get a 5, but you get a damn good score.

Score: 2

"And the attempt is... eh."

submission: Final Fantasy - FU

date: July 30, 2004

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Ok, so you ripped off some sprites what appears to be Znes, at least that's a start. Try looking on the web for more sprites, (I think a site called Shyguy has many sprites on popular games). That way, you won't have normal sprites in the first scene, then have TINY sprites in the next one.

As for the movement: change it up. Don't have constant speeds on all characters.

Save yourself some effort! Although it looks cool spelling out all the text, it's distracting and overall slow. Emotions like OMG and such should be clumped together, but other than that, a word box should have all the words for that box. Also, increase the text size, try finding the Final Fantasy Font.

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Ok, you got sound down, nothing wrong here. But I suggest a choboco theme for the beginning. Remember, the music sets the mood. If their looking for a Rabbite (Not Rabbit) make it silly. I mean who in their right minds would LOOK for a rabbite?

Interactvity ..........
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Nothing need to change here- but as a reminder- some people read slow. Putting text boxes at buttons to speed up/slow down text isn't all that of a bad idea.

Style |||.......
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We've done FF so much it's bashed into the ground. You need to make yours a unique angle.

Violence |.........
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A frame meeting up with the character, then moving back, then explaining his dick got torn off, isn't violence. At least add some sound affects to it.

Humor |.........
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Like Style above, many jokes here have been bashed into the ground. Make it unique.

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You just need to keep practicing. Before making a flash, think about what you want to do. Flash is an art. It combines writing and drawing- which mainly focus on orginality. Think up orginal ideas, and you'll be on the frontpage in no time.

Just look at battlefield- That's basically Half-Life in stick form.

Score: 10

"Again, excellent."

submission: HotFish-SameButDifferent

date: July 5, 2004

I saw this on your site while it was still in Koriean. Although I never understood it much, it was still nicely done.

Now that it is in english, it's a magnificent piece of art that gives off a very good moral that even though we're all made the same, we turn out different (That was sappy)

Keep up the excellent work.